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Submitted: May 25, 2012
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+Summer Stroll+by *Amai--Kiss

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Okay, so this is what happens when I'm not a big lazy ass. XD I finally did an effort to draw a background. I guess it's okay for a first time. Could have been better but I'm a total noob when it comes to shading and lightning of backgrouns.

I also did a more detailed shading on the hair because I felt like it. XD

So yeah, it's my OC Ami eating like these kind of ice cream thingies which have chocolate on the outside and vanilla ice cream in the middle. = w = And some of the ice cream is dripping on her bewbs. ( ...They look way bigger here than they're supposed to be.

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~~Someone should lick it off~~

Critique by ~Mrchuchum Nov 5, 2012, 2:15:59 AM

Hello Amai! I would like to point out some things, please don't take any offence. I think that the face is amazing! I love eyes and such but the hair needs some work, first it needs a bit more shine and I think it should have some light parts for the sun since its a beach and all. Second are the feet, legs and arms, I think since you made the face thin the legs and arms don't really work, its a bit too chubby. And the feet, it should have more shape a bit slender maybe. Background is okay but it needs to have a more realistic side. I think you left the sky bare, it needs to have dark sides and light sides, I think that the clouds should be more visable so it gives a more anime-like feeling. For the waves, from my point of view I can see a white line in the waves in the shore, I think you should have spread it more and made it a bit more messy to make it look natural. I also think that she should have a shadow and that the sea should have more shading. For the finish! I love the dress and the magnum bar.
Thats it! Sorry for such a long Critique! Have a nice day!

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~Kohakuuu Jun 2, 2012 Hobbyist Artist

Hello, here's your critique!

Negatives:

The background is very good drawn for the first time. But there are some things that noticed me. First of all, the sea has a lot of dark and light spots, because of the sun, and I miss quite a lot of those spots.

Also, the sand. it's a bit unilateral. You could've made a few loose sand grains floating through the wind, and making footsteps in the ground, also, you could've darkened the place where she's standing. And if you look at a beach, you see that there's always a part wet and sticky because of the see.

her right arm is thinner then her left arm, wich makes it a bit confusing. You should thicken her right arm or thinnen her left arm.

You could use really dark shades for her hair, to make it look more realistic

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