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+Pastel Beauties+ by Amai--Kiss +Pastel Beauties+ by Amai--Kiss
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I-I... finished it. After pretty much two and a half weeks work. From sketch to this. :iconcannotevenplz: My hand needs a long rest now.

So, these are the seven main OCs who will appear as main characters in a story I'm planning to write. I'll write a detailed history/character description of each of them later on. Right now I'll just inform you guys with the names and ages.

From left to right :

Midori - 18 years old : This was one of my chibi adoptables, but since she never got adopted, I took her in as my own OC. I didn't have an OC with green hair yet after all. I think she looks quite cute/pretty.

Yuzuna - 16 years old : I really like the design of this OC, mainly the hair. At first it was gonna be a low ponytail with a white rose but then I ended up changing it again and it ended up like this.

Nana - 14 years old : Okay, those who saw the WIP will be confused. At first this was gonna be my older OC Mayu but I had some trouble shading the tanned skin. Then I started doubting the light blonde/tanned skin combination. In the end I just made a total new OC. I already changed the eye color and hair style after all anyway.

Mayu will appear in the story as a minor character though, and she'll have a connection to this new OC Nana.

Ami - 17 years old : My persona and the main among the main characters I guess? XD I really enjoy Ami's new hairstyle, the rose-kind of buns are fun to draw. I still want her dress too.

Aki - 17 years old : I brought back Aki's original design with some changes! I really missed drawing her. She looks so sweet. I also cut her hair a bit, since it was quite hard to draw really long, wavy hair.

Ringo - 12 years old : I noticed that all my OCs up to now were teens around my age, so I decided to make an OC that's still close to the kid age range. I wanted her to be cute and bubbly.

Mila - 15 years old : Mila's back with a new, more mature design~ She got rid of the pigtails and has a cooler outfit now. Her character stayed the same though, so yandere alert!

That's it for now. I hope you all enjoy this picture. Obviously there are still many flaws, but I really did my best on it.

Also, a question for all you guys, which OC do you like the best? o u o Based on the designs of course.

I own all the characters
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The first thing that strikes the viewer has got to be the beautiful array of colours; the colours are nice and soft, and are pleasing to the eye.
The characters all have a good sense of motion, and the hair looks soft and flowing. The eyes really show emotion, and the expressions clearly show the individual personalities of each character. The background is not too attention grabbing, it fills the picture well and gives it some life. The anatomy of the characters is perfect, and this drawing obviously had a lot of thought and care put into it! Well done!
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Critique by crazytomboy18 Oct 25, 2012, 5:49:37 PM
First of all, the eyes look so bright and expressive, and I like how they shine really bright, making them look cute and happy. I also like their hair because it's not only colorful, but beautiful to look at. And I also like the outfits, they're so colorful and really well drawn! I feel you put in lots of effort into drawing those characters and the winking makes them look oh-so cute! They look almost huggable! And I especially love the youngest one here. She looks really bubbly and expressive! What I also like about this picture is the background! It's bright, cheery and colorful, just like the girls! You're gonna get a lot of good critiques from a lot of people on this site, and keep up the good work!

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askpkmngreen Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
((Woah, it's pretty but the colors are really bright, even though I have brightness at 0%.

Other than that, it's really good.))
Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(( Thank you <3 ))
askpkmngreen Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
((No problem.))
chemicaRouge Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
AMAI-CHWAAAAAANN~~ :iconbrohugplz:

OMG, you have so many new OC's~~ And one of them's a red-head~!~!~! :iconexcitedlaplz: Uwaahh, and your art has improved so much!! ;u; b
Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Thank you so much. > u < Oh yes, I love my little Yuzuna and her red hair. <3 I'm glad you like her too.
chemicaRouge Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
You're very much welcome!! :iconspinplz:
Yeah, I think Yuzuna's gonna be my fave out of all your OC's, mostly bc of her red hair. |D But I love them all~ ^o^/
NormaLeeInsane Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They all look so pretty. I love their outfits and the pastel colours you've used. :aww:
World-Inside-Me Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Here is your requested critique from :iconcriticentrum:~

> First of all, I'm finding it a little difficult to find any improvements here. I will say though, that perhaps adding more lighter tones onto the 'top edges' of the clothes' creases and the skin would give a little more dynamic to the piece and express the lighting more. More light tones on the hair would make it look better as well.
> I also agree with :iconanimezy: , that the eyelashes on the one character look a little off. As well as this, the winking eye of the last character makes her head look a little out of proportion - though this could just be me.

> All of these characters are just adorable. You've shown all of their personalities through their different poses and expressions and I love how unique each of their designs are. The range of clothing and hair styles is just superb as well.
> The way you've added all the details such as the creases in the clothing is just perfect and really looks superb. I know I've told you this before - you always make clothes look stunning!
> The colouring is really soft and neat as well. I especially love how you add the shadows and made their skin look so smooth. The eyes are so bright and shiny too~

Overall, this piece is just brilliant. Each character is so cute and fun, and you've really portrayed each one perfectly. Stunning work! :love:
PunchieTheNeko Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Filmographer
Looks nice.
AkiTanaka Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
I like Midori and Ringo. I really like Midori's out fit and Ringo's just plain adorable~
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