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New chibi style :la:

I didn't really liked the previous chibis I made for the keychains. The poses were boring and the anatomy was horrible even for chibis. I like these ones a lot better.

Twilight Sparkle's from My Little Pony : Friendship is Magic
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Let's see. Your attention to clothes is very admirable. All those folds and wrinkles, and the way you shade and light, it's wonderful detail. Hair looks great, as well. A lot of attention to shading make it seem full of volume. Finally, your sense of fashion is adorable.

In regard to vision, the thicker and stubbier arms, legs, and fingers give her the appearance of youth; only further increasing how adorable this piece is.

I've always loved the style of which your eyes are colored, and the overall color scheme matches well. The only details I can think to point out are the cheek and horn. The cheek is too pointed. Like her arms and legs, it needs to be short and chubby, too; that would be a youthful trait.

This may just be a technicality, but unicorn horns are on the forehead, usually. But perhaps that translates onto the top of the head, when designing a human unicorn. I wouldn't know, but you did do a good job with the hair and horn's relation to eachother; making it look natural.

It's an extremely cute piece. Overall, I love this. :love: Keep up the great work. :#1:
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This is my (second? I don't know xD) first time critiquing, so excuse my mistakes ^^;

I'll start with the positives.
The shading & coloring is very well done, I love the hair and eyes!

The anatomy is very good, too, I like the arms/hands the most!

Now for the things that should need fixing (which isn't much, really)
The cheeks are a bit.. pointed. Do I make sense? haha
I understand it's a chibi, but the cheeks should be a bit more round, not pointed.

The bottom part of the hair is very.. gap-ish? There's gaps between the hair, it works for some parts, but for some gaps you should maybe make it a bit less .. gap-ish xD (wah I can't think of my words!)


Overall, this is a well-done piece! Honestly this is one of my favourites from you. Keep up with the good work! ♥
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Twilight looks so cute in her uniform
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Aww she is so cute!
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~KyattoIvery Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome!!! :love: i love this chibi style!!! <3333
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*snokkedoedel Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cute!!!
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~BlueIcey Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so adorable~
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*ThunderWolfang Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How cute! X3
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~Nekoseznya Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just a few pointers

- Eyes a bit too far apart. It looks somewhat off
- That cheek is too pointy. I keep looking back at it, it just doesn't seem to fit.
- Make the neck thicker. You have thick legs and arms, why not a neck? Even in a chibi, the neck should be at least as thick as the arms and legs, if not thicker.

Besides that, it's very adorable and looks lovely. Good job
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*kiyoshi-seishin Jun 10, 2012   Traditional Artist
awww she looks soo cute i love your new style :icontinoplz: its like Semi chibi, its very adorable and the anatomy looks great, i love how chubby her legs are o .. o her hair is very pretty and flowy, i love her outfit, and all the purple :iconawwwplz: her bright pretty purple eyes really stand out too ^^ great work<3
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D'aw, so cute <3
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