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Critique by melancholyXlove Jul 22, 2012, 12:37:23 PM
Alright > 3 < This is my first critique... so I'm not too good at them... ^^;

Okay... the first thing I have to say is that you have improved. A LOT. Your colouring, anatomy, everything. But some things do look a bit... off. The legs look a bit too long, and the left arm looks a bit too short. If you stand up, the tip of your fingers should go a bit above your knee. Also, maybe it's just me, but the back needs to be a bit... thinner, for lack of a better word? Something about the left foot, as well... the front of the shoe looks like it needs to be a bit more rounded. To me it looks a bit like there's just a bulge in it. e u e;;
All that aside, you still did a fantastic job. I can't wait to see you improve more u v u<333

And by the way, I had no idea at all how to rate this omg
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I have no clue how to rate so ignore that? haha XD This is also my first critique so I hope I do ok...

This is very good overall! The colouring and shading are fantastic, your line work is very clean, and the colours themselves all really compliment each other! You also managed to draw the hands well which, in my opinion, basically deserves a medal haha XD

I would just change a few things about the proportions. The legs seem to be a bit too thick compared to the upper body, which looks kind of odd. Your arms should also be quite a bit longer, the fingertips reaching (I'm using the hand to our left as an example) to about where the second dramatic/huge fold in the skirt lines up with (not sure how to word it). You could make the shoulders just a teensy bit wider to match the face width, and a slightly longer (less circular) face may compliment the proportions better.

Wow, that sounds like a lot, but really it's just small things here and there XD Like I said before, it is still a gorgeous picture, you just have to work on the proportions a bit. :3
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Aisuru-Tenshi Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AIODHIOFBHG *steals Mila away from you * <3333
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Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:noes:
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StripeyKneeSocks Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Very, very pretty
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Eternal-Whispers Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not really a lolita but this is really awesome
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Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The clothes are from bodyline though. Which is supposed to be a lolita brand. XD
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Eternal-Whispers Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I guess i'm not used to this lolita. XD i usually just look mostely at erotic, punk, and goth lolita. Not casual lolita >_<
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Thoarla Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The head its small but so beautifull
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Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I think it's fine. XD I used to draw heads too big.
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Thoarla Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah ok xD
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Shade-Violet Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Improvement! 8D
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Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. <3
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