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+Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash+ by Amai--Kiss +Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash+ by Amai--Kiss
Finished~ > u <

I'm pretty proud of it. <3 I'd liked it even more if I would have drawn the clouds myself but that's still too hard for me. I did draw the rainbow myself though.

Anyway, these are Fluttershy and Rainbow dash drawn as humans. ( But with their wings ) I know Rainbow Dash is supposed to be more of a tomboy but I just like drawing frilly dresses. XD Lets just say she's wearing shorts under it.

Cloud brushes (c) ~RoseCabriolet
Art (c) *Amai--Kiss
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:iconrengy-ski:
Critique by Rengy-ski Jun 3, 2012, 1:09:47 PM
Overall this picture is very cute, original and great. I like the anatomy of the girls and the outfits/hair you gave them is different to all the other MLP gijinkas I have seen, these ones suit your style and have made it different to the others yet still match their personality. From this picture we can see the sun in the top left corner behind them but not all the lighting and shading on the girls matches that. The main thing for you now is to practice making your own BGs, instead of using brushes, so the pictures will be more impressive and advanced. But overall I still think it's really good :heart:
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10 out of 10 deviants thought this was fair.

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Overall, I think this is really great, and I love how your style mixes in with the soft and friendly looking gijinkas >w<

Okay, so..

Negatives
- I can't really tell where the focus is, because there is a huge open space by the rainbow, so I can't tell whether the focus is on the rainbow, Fluttershy or Rainbow Dash
- Fluttershy's hand seems to be bigger than her head
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Postives
+The design on the gijinka's is pretty original. I think this because many people just but the mark on they're butts and put it on their skirts or something, but this one kind of resembles them pretty well
+The background and the picture fits together very well!
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:iconbearboymcg:
bearboymcg Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015   Traditional Artist
Cute drawing:3
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:icontrixie47:
TRIXIE47 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Student Artist
wow!!!!!! tgapt is impressed
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:iconoratherebelkitsune:
OraTheRebelKitsune Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty XD
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:iconfortunafiesta:
fortunaFiesta Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
золотые руки
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:iconjdavidbrony:
JDavidBrony Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
So cute!
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:iconyomi-sky:
yomi-sky Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Artist
they are extremely kawaii♥
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:iconxxdarkzephyrgirlxx:
xXDarkZephyrGirlxX Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Writer
Beautiful and Magnificent :D
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:icon00xnekotamimix00:
00xNekotaMimix00 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Rainbow looks so CUTE! :D
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:iconfelix-nyan:
felix-nyan Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Rainbow still looks like a tomboy, I think. Tomboys can still have cute outfits xD
I really love her socks. She looks so cute and athletic <3
You've probably realised Rainbow Dash is my favourite pony :D
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:iconmonsterkiddo42:
monsterkiddo42 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
they look like faries
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:iconxx--mana--xx:
Xx--mana--xX Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YAY someone finally drew Rainbowdash with a ponytail :LL
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:iconamai--kiss:
Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD
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:iconzeldamaster1234:
ZELDAmaster1234 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is so cool!
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:iconaqomxg:
AqomXG Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Great pic, but the dress...no is very...pony...
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:iconmeowmeowmeow21:
Meowmeowmeow21 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
Rainbow Dash doesn't look tomboy enough... she needed spikier hair
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:iconamai--kiss:
Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah I know. XD This is a newer version I made of her alone > [link]
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:iconxxsachan:
XxSaChan Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow that rainbow daish looks like my OC SugarPop only the bunny ears are missing xD
but nice drawingg<3333
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:iconamai--kiss:
Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fdjs sorry. ; o ;

I didn't mean to do that. :iconorzplz: I never even thought of it. I thought your OC had a black dress.
I'll give her a different design for the keychain though. XD This one looks to girly anyway.
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:iconxxsachan:
XxSaChan Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
u7waaa it is okayy really<3333
haha you dón't need to change it:heart:
btw waarom praat ik nie gewoon zo xD
das BabyDoll die is zwart jurkje met kat oren en SugarPop is wit met Konijn *3*
haha maar het geeft echt niet meis:iconbrohugplz::heart:
ik vind hem wel erg mooi*Q*<3333
love yoú're drawings<3333
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:iconimmasweetslovinggirl:
immasweetslovinggirl Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
how cute!
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:iconblueicey:
BlueIcey Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute! ^^
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:icontoontwins:
ToonTwins Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute! :meow:
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:iconamai--kiss:
Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. <3
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:iconcareerfromdistrict4:
CareerFromDistrict4 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student General Artist
This picture is really cute and the wings don't look akward on them which is always a plus. The rainbow in the background is really cool I love how it is sort of transparent. Fluttershy is perfect and maybe Rarity and Fluttershy forced Dash into the frilly dress, you never know.
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:icondeadbunny16:
DeadBunny16 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Aweeeee , really nice and cute~!!!
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:iconnadugi:
Nadugi Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012   Traditional Artist
perfect *--*
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:iconderfurshur:
derfurshur Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
OMG they're both so adorable, I also love that you gave Rainbow Dash a ponytail because I think she looks great with that hairstyle
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:iconamai--kiss:
Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you~
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:iconcatcleopatra:
CatCleopatra Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012   Photographer
Hello there, let's see what I can do for you:

Negative:
-Try to use some more darker colors also. So you will get more contrast.
-The legs of the girl further away are a bit too long. Remember, the legs are just as long as the head and upper body together.
-I can't find from which direction the light is coming. Always decide where the light source is before you start shading, and highlight that side of the objects while you shade the other side.
-The chawline of the girl at the left looks a bit wrong. The chin isn't under the mouth, but more to the left, and the cheekbone seems to protrude a bit too much.
-The position of the feet are a bit weird. You could use a ref to fix this.

Positive:
-Love the soft colors!
-Very nice background. Love the clouds, rainbow and the light effect you did at the upper left.
-Nice poses and composition.
-Love how you drew the hair, there is a lot of movement in it.

You did a great job already! Just keep practicing and I' m sure you will improve a lot! :iconcriticentrum:
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:iconskellerart:
SkellerArt Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student General Artist
Very Cute :D
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:iconxxnightstarxx:
XxNightstarxX Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
Ooooh. It's so colorful and pretty! :dummy:
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:iconcrystalrobot:
CrystalRobot Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow that is really beautiful! so colorful
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:iconpsychoticallycute:
PsychoticallyCute Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i love this pic you did a really good job with it
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:iconhelsaabi:
Helsaabi Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
I really like it! >3<
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:iconkootiepie1994:
kootiepie1994 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
yes, i like this.
good anatomy and nice color.
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:iconthefruitsong:
thefruitsong Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute! But if you're going to use and, let Rainbow Dash be closer to her. "with" is less misleading, and gives the image that Rainbow Dash will be in it, just not as close.
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MioTheStalker Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh golly this is adorable! :heart: I really liked Fluttershy's dress! Really adorable :iconawwwplz:
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:iconbriee-zee:
Briee-zee Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG too cute~
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:icondarksaph:
DarkSaph Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
Wonderful!!!
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:iconrubeah:
Rubeah Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg! Rainbow Dash's hair is awesome!!
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:iconcupcake-kitty-chan:
Cupcake-Kitty-chan Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
It looks really great colored! :)

I'm not sure now if you got my previous comment, but if you have time, could you tell me if you still use GIMP for the lineart and if so, how thick your lines are? (Assuming use of the paths tool.)
My apologies for bugging you again if you just haven't gotten around to replying yet, or if you've been busy. ^^; I didn't see the lineart in your deviations or scrapbook, though, so I thought you might have deleted it and lost the comment.
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:iconamai--kiss:
Amai--Kiss Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. ^^

I did reply but you're right that I deleted the previous version to make place for this one.

I use paint tool SAI now and the thickness of the lines is 0.7 ( the finest one )
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:iconcupcake-kitty-chan:
Cupcake-Kitty-chan Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
Thanks! :D
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:icongoldbeauti:
Goldbeauti Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's beautifull :3
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:iconravyn998:
ravyn998 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
this is so cute!
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:iconnay-hime:
Nay-Hime Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
They look so sweet! I really love it :love:
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:iconragingwalrus:
RAGINGWALRUS Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
Well done. :D
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:iconlights0nata:
LightS0nata Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student General Artist
They look super pretty ♥
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:iconchupacabra-desu:
Chupacabra-Desu Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That's one awesome rainbow dash
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:iconkiyoshi-seishin:
kiyoshi-seishin Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012   Traditional Artist
aww this is amazing i love the designs you gave the two of them so detailed and cute, they are both so adorable, their hair is so pretty and the butterflies are too :icontinoplz: the poses turned out great, and you did a really great job with the background here, great work<3 :')
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